Liberty to write with ease;
Writing without gallop;
Stepping on Chomsky's rules;
Striking the Halliday;
Freedom without comma;
Clearing the road for mind;
Painting the way you wish -
Licence to every poet!
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Showing posts with label Critique from the Jungle Poet. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Critique from the Jungle Poet. Show all posts
Saturday, 16 July 2011
Tuesday, 12 July 2011
On My Road: Possible Solutions!
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ON MY ROAD. On my road to worthy world, come across a litle girl. On her chin rolls some drops. Tears of what i never know. With querries filled my mouth. What cause i still never know. On her white attire, my two eyes glanced. Then i saw a dirty stain, so it caused her bitter cry. Who will help my litle girl, to remove her dirty stain? .....Ahmed Bolaji Abdulrauf
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Going through your lines again -
how I wish the little girl
meets a man like Jungle Poet,
who can use his lyric lines...
wash away her dirty stains...
Or you tell the little girl
When you meet her face again:
That the stains on clothes can clear,
but the stains on heart remain;
And can spoil a work of years
just within a single sec...
Lull the girl with Jungle lines -
Wish the lad the better ones...
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